Elevator Pitch No. 3


Some feedback from my second elevator pitch that I thought was important was that it was a lot more natural than my first one. This is something I wanted to work on with this third time as well, and I think it shows in comparison to my first one. Since it was the third time doing this assignment, it was a lot easier to record. It took me so many tries (around 7 but it felt like 15) for me to get a good recording for the first elevator pitch, but this one took a lot less.

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  1. UnknownNovember 8, 2017 at 4:27 PM

    Hi Olivia,

    Great job with your third elevator pitch! I struggled with the same issue of allowing my pitch to sound natural and flow smoothly. It is hard to sound conversational and natural while trying to incorporate all of the right information and nervously record into a camera. I think you did an awesome job and it did sound natural so thats good! I am glad to hear that it did not take you as many tries to record it as that means you are becoming more comfortable with your pitch. Great job!

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